Comments can provide additional facts or perspectives. The tips below are intended to help the public submit effective comments to improve proposed DGOs before they are finalized. Following these tips help SFPD and DPA understand the comments and respond to them appropriately.
• Before submitting a comment, read the complete text of the proposed DGO.
• Comments should be directed at the text of the proposed DGO and/or the procedures the Department follows in proposing the DGO.
• Clearly identify the specific section and/or subsection number you are commenting on. For example, DGO 5.01.04.D.3.
If addressing multiple sections, identify each section or subsection associated with the comment.
• Expanding on comments with factual information, sound reasoning, and/or specific examples of how you or your organization
would be impacted negatively or positively provides additional context for the recipient(s).
• When applicable, provide references to any reports, articles, or other source material that support your comment.
• If you disagree with a proposed DGO or section of a DGO, suggest an alternative that includes revised language.
• Address the pros and cons of your position. Consider other points of view and respond with facts and sound reasoning.
• Proofread written comments before submission.
• Do not submit the same written comments more than once.